All Comments on 'The Switch'

Twelve years and bored already, I don't see these marriages lasting long term after this. Not my thing.

You should not comment the marriage but the story, if you didn't realize yet! And the story is nice, realistic and hot.

Good development and suspense. You write well. Ignore the comments of the evangelical right and the disenchanted middle. You wrote a good story! I'm sort of hoping for a Chapter 2. // R1

you made it real...thanks

One of the best that I have read.

Did you just get tired writing? I enjoyed the story and was looking forward to the other half of the pairs, and resulting continuation of their lives, then you bailed on us. Bad deal.

There is, IMHO, too much repetitive discussion before their first cross-date. It obviously needed much more than a paragraph to make it a realistic exploration among four individuals and four pairs (two married couples and two sets of 'buddies' - the cross-pair couples had their own discussions after it became a clear commitment)! The two dates of the one cross-couple explored was very hot!

need to tell the other couples story in as much detail. Very Good

Great story. Keep chapters coming

Danced in spastic tremors. Drinking from the fountain of procreation. The ultimate in human mating pleasure? Get carried away much?

Silly story about the fallacies of swinging. This will tear the couples apart very quickly.