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All Comments on 'The Taboo Transformation Ch. 02'

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LeenysmanLeenysmanabout 2 years ago

Only complaint is a paragraph in the scene between Colleen and Lillian when you repeatedly use "she" for both of them and I had to struggle to figure out who was doing what to whom. Otherwise, another excellent chapter! 5 stars!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Excellent! Can’t wait for the next instalment.

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Hello All: Update as of May 2023. I have had people reach out to me regarding sequels to stories that I have posted on here, so let me address those first: "Mary's Innocent Passion." This is titled "Innocent Passion" on my page on Smashwords and my personal website. No seque...