All Comments on 'The Taking of Talora'

Thank you! Beautifully written!

is not your forte. Virgins or non-gravid women don't usually produce milk (that would be sign of a serious hormonal imbalance), and even most pregnant women don't. Not bad, but your storytelling needs work.

You have an artful way with words - pleasure to read!

Thank you, previous commenter, for noting the improbability of the biology. Do note that this is a fantasy-themed fantasy, with magic and medicines that don't exist, thus lactating virgins have a place in the world. If biology had been my forte, and biological accuracy my aim, I doubt I'd be writing fantasy-themed erotica.

Obviously, the other anonymous didn't read that the herb was making her lactate. This story was great and I hope you read more from you soon!

Really enjoyed this! Would love to read more from you.

Really enjoyed the way you write and also the magical themes of this story.

Look forward to reading more of your stories!

You’re a talented writer!! Love fantasy erotica! Please write more!

Excellent! I do hope there is at least another chapter to this tale. Allow me to add another five stars ☆☆☆☆☆

Really enjoyed it, so hot and liked the amount of background/storyline included, well done! Hope you continue to write more stories here :)

Hnnngh. Knotting, noncon, first time, forced orgasms... you really know how to get all the best stuff in there!

Hey folks, thank you so much for the kind comments. I really appreciate it! I'm glad so many people are enjoying the story. And thanks to the people who reached out through feedback. You have all made this first-time posting a very pleasant experience :)

Can't believe it's only 2 pages. Write more, please!

Loved this! Its hard to find good writing in erotica, so this one was such an exciting find! I definitely consider this to be one of my favorites. One nitpicky detail, but hymens aren't actually a barrier you can rip through in adulthood (and if they are you have to go to the hospital!), but moreso an extra ring of flesh around the vaginal entrance 😁 you cant actually tell if someone's a virgin because of it! That said, this is a really good story. I hope u write more like it 😊

Wow, just wow - you have such an erotic and raw story telling style, love it / you should write more often. The wild animalistic breeding and betrayal of the body is such a turn on - primal mating - hard to beat.

This is fire

Thank you very much to the new commenters (well, everyone who commented after my last comment over a year ago). I appreciate your kind feedback more than I can say.

Thank you to Anonymous who wrote about hymens. I've tried to give a more accurate description in the sequel. I really appreciate your thoughts and encouragement.

I do have a weakness for monsters claiming maidens. Although I prefer them to be dragged down into the dark to be kept in chains where they belong!

Incredibly hot story - loved it. You should write more