All Comments on 'The Tales of Ariel Brody Ch. 05'

Everything about the series is great until halfway through this chapter we suddenly go from "I said...." to "Ariel said...." I don't normally side with the grammar police, but this is really distracting! I hope you can get it fixed.

What's with the change from first person to third? It's a great story, but now we're twisting in the wind. We need MORE!

Gave it only three stars because the story leaves you hanging, it needs an ending chapter….