by Reefkeeper
Gave it only three stars because the story leaves you hanging, it needs an ending chapter….
What's with the change from first person to third? It's a great story, but now we're twisting in the wind. We need MORE!
Everything about the series is great until halfway through this chapter we suddenly go from "I said...." to "Ariel said...." I don't normally side with the grammar police, but this is really distracting! I hope you can get it fixed.