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Click hereShe kissed me back and hugged me close, both of us nude, and laughed. "You know it, buster. Now, let's get to bed and get some sleep. The sooner these next three days are over, the happier we'll all be."
This is without doubt by far the best story I have ever read, and I've read a lot. And I haven't even read chapter eight yet. What makes it so good for me is the love and respect within the family, the education and understanding and the slow build up and incredibly high level of sexual desire. The only downside, is that, unless there's an unexpected explantation inthe last chapter, there is an inconsistency about the three days wait, given that Paul and Kathy could both be having sex and also that the fact that Sue has been taking the pill regularly. Of course, this is going to help create and great orgy but Paul didn't have to have had a vasectomy, Kathy, in her late thirties should still be fertile and Sue could have confessed to having forgotten to take the pill one morning,
Stupid question, but if Paul and Kathy are both sterile, as Kathy said, why wait?
I can't understand why mother and son or father and daughter can't fuck. Both parents are sterile. Other than that, I am enjoying the hell out of this story. Very well written.
I'm sorry to say that with this installment, it's become a little bit too predictable. There's the lesbian stuff and the veto on any dad-son bi action. These aren't fatal flaws, but, as I say, too predictable. It's okay for mom and her daughter to play lickety-split with each other as far as I'm concerned. But then when can't dad and his son just suck each other off? In stories of family fucking, the females often get a kick out of watching the males blowing their balls in each other's mouth. Maybe the males do it just to find out what it feels like for the mother or daughter to get a mouthful of semen, maybe out of a sudden urge by dad and his boy to get really intimate. Well, anyway, it's nightshadow's brilliant series, and I'm still grateful for it.
Thank's for such a beautiful and thought provoking story.I'm sure I am not the only reader who has had thier brain put into gear about the problems you have opened up.Thank's again.
I feel their pain...I am speechless...so I'll write instead. When these people finally get together they will probably explode several major arteries. Oh...the pain...
I've been working non-stop on a handful of projects, so progress on all of them has been a bit half-assed. But I am glad to announce that I have finally gotten the final chapter of The Talk completed and posted here to Lit-E. I'm thinking that it'll be the last of the series, so enjoy it when it finally goes public.
Thanks again for all of your encouragement and comments. They've meant an awful lot to me.
I'm dying out here, only your next chapter can save me. Please hurry...
As previously stated, <pant> <pant> Is it done yet?! :)
Best story I have ever read, Hands down! (in pants).
Keep up the great work.
And marry X-mas...
This story is great. I can't wait to here about the next three days leading up to the family orgy. You have developed the charcters and the story line in great detail making it highly erotic. Keep up the good work and hopefully you have alot more to the story after they finally have the big day.
you are one helluva author,but,your killing me man!..lol.making me wait so long between chapters..HELP!! lol..great story,but let them fuck..lol
oh... mannnn....It was really painful to wait this long....
I almost left my hope....You must finish this story....It's
the most extraordinary one I've ever read....and i've read a lot....
The story is like a sexual conquest unfulfilled. The first six installments built up nicely. But this one deflated from the over long foreplay of the wait between installment six and seven. Call it Premature Ejaculation or Erectile Dysfunction, but Nightshadow you'll need to provide your audience with a little more than this to keep them interested. Sorry.