by Dirty0ldMan
She's still a slutty little tease who has a long way to go before she truly understands her place as a slave slut whore. Nipple torment has its place, but don't rule out a good old fashioned beating. ;)
Normally I would have given this a four on the simple basis that it's too short to really get into. But the comment from the guy below me about a good old fashion beating, had be in hysterics. Maybe it's the just the way I hear it in my head, though...
... i... for one.... would love to see more of this tale unfold!!!
Lots of room for expansion of the theme here surely this is just the first of many episodes.
The content is pretty good, but the writing and grammar errors are difficult for me to get past. The worst example was the narrator cutting rope from her legs, when he'd never tied her legs with rope.