All Comments on 'The Target Ch. 03'

Roman shows up out of the blue with orders to kill Jackie, or did Roman forget? Duh! No wonder Jackie drugged him, but it still doesn't explain why Jackie would leave Roman in his living room unguarded and unsecured. And what did Jackie expect, for Roman to forget his assignment and walk out once he awoke? I'd be scared too- of my own stupidity. And why is Jackie sleeping in a tux?

I like this story. Who says you can't fall in love with your assassin? Or, the other way round. I am looking forward to more of Jackie and Roman. Sex scene was good, too. Please keep writing.

This felt a little rushed and uncoordinated. You should try finding an editor, and there are some very good How-To's on Literotica for sex scenes and story building :)

Still liked it though.

the idea of hitman falling for his target is great but i think you need to build up the characters more before we can believe in their relationship

Ok.

its good enjoying loving it . now get on with it