All Comments on 'The Taste of Freedom Ch. 01'

by Tybman69

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DevonCowboyDevonCowboyover 4 years ago
New at writing!

But not new at getting royally fucked I'm sure. That was intensely hot and spoke volumes about the desire to be deeply ploughed and giving yourself over to a donkey dick! More please!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Excellent! Please continue.

Can't wait to see how this unfolds. Some BDSM + humiliation that gives subs pleasure is soooo hot. Especially if you're able to keep it real. For a beginner, you're writing is good.

smokedancesmokedanceover 4 years ago
A good first story

Can't wait to see where this story goes and how you improve as a writer during it. Can't wait to hear all about Hayden's training

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