All Comments on 'The Tease'

and tempting prose. Good job! More would be nice. I'll be looking for your work. Take care...

She's probably not on the pill. If she was a tease and a virgin, actual sex wasn't in her plans. I suspect she'd be confident enough not to carry protection. A possible nine-month unplanned event could double the comeuppance. Of course if the narrator has a preggo thing.... ;)

Id like to read more to see what happens next.

Wonderful story! Maybe Susan's first time playing hide the sausage, will make her a whole new person- a MOMMY!! Please write another chapter!