by Red_Jakal
I'm sorry, how do you mean? I just scrolled through the page and didn’t see anything out of place... Is page 3 bad in content/writing/grammar or is there some kind other kind or error?
I apologize if you don't like the content or if there are grammatical errors, But if it is something else, I'd gladly fix it if you would point it out. Thanks for the feedback, it's always appreciated.
Awesome job on the tease parts, believable and very hot! Can't wait to see what she comes up with next :)
Absolutely the best" high school tease and denial" story since Begger's stories and Peter's Mike and Peggy! Please dont make us wait a year with the next chapter:-) gratulation!!!!!
An amazing read, with great build up to an awesome end. Can't wait to read more
Stephanie is the kind of girl who would definitely keep your life "interesting". Assuming you could avoid having an early coronary during the relationship.
If you continue.the story (oh, please do!), perhaps Ashley could conspire with Stephanie the mynx to improve on the boyfriend-teasing project. In fact, you could have her be willing to join in, but only to a certain point due to a commitment issue or being unwilling to go too far with another girl's man. That would dovetail nicely with the ongoing plot.
In case I wasn't clear about how I liked the story: it was blazing hot as well as kinda romantic. Loved it.
A little teasing is fine, this was way too much for too long.
I had a hard time getting past the part where they didn't have time to get together. They lived close but couldn't spare 20 min for a quickie?
6 pages of teasing and then the end is too short and not all that hot. Pretty much the story itself was a tease.
In Ch 1 she is a sweet girl, here she is just a twisted bitch
Loved it very well but where is the next chapter waiting for it the build up was amazing like always your stories are extremely good keep going on
WOW.... I think someone tortured you along time ago to come up with this one as I would have jumped her after the first day and said - - sue me.! LOL
Yep == dead meat would have been her name.* hehe Very good story though and enjoyed it until the last drip ..drop hit the floor.! Thx.
Do you have another chapter ready yet. I was so hard almost the whole story. Can not wait for the next chapter or more.
Dull
Repetitive
Sluggish
You must have been gleeful at your own imaginative prowess
sigh
Obviously not another year as promised. It’s been 9 years. Too bad, these are good stories.