All Comments on 'The Teasing Masseuse'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Decent

Good story

ProfDavrosProfDavrosabout 7 years ago
Erotic tease

Magic, love the erotic tease better than graphic descriptions of straight action.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Just bad writing

You might want to learn how humans actually talk to each other. Also, you don't need to keep telling us that he has an erection. You only need to do it once, not every other paragraph.

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