All Comments on 'The Teenage Dominatrix Ch. 01'

Awesome story, looking forward to more chapters

The story described a dreamy heaven, a masturbation fantasy. We would all love to have those events happen to us, especially when young.

There was very little eroticism. Somehow, the writer told the story in a deadpan style which deleted present-moment eroticism but all was not lost because the dream-quality was well done and it may persist in my memory.

I loved the pacing! Characters initially getting developed with enough of a tease to the reader to keep me wanting to proceed with the following chapters. Good stuff!