All Comments on 'The Temp'

by macymadison

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AeneaTAeneaTabout 3 years ago

May be the best written story I’ve ever read here! It wasn’t the hottest, but I truly enjoyed how you built up the tension within tiger as his obsession grows. Congratulations!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Loved it, thanks so much!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Please add another chapter...it's top good to finish there. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Well written, proofread, and edited. A genre I seldom read, but I quickly found myself hoping another chapter will arrive soon.

coyote62coyote62almost 3 years ago

I have been in this same predicament. It thrills the heart and excites the nerves. Now that im much older its only a dream now... To feel that excitement again.

Great story and it brought back so many memories. Thanks

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationalmost 3 years ago

Verrrry well done! Thinking with the little head always leads to some form of excitement. It is important to include the Other head at the earliest convenience. Nice to see Temps are sometimes still brighter than the bosses.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved the characterization of Roger Lincoln and his obsession with Gloria. Fun story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I just reread this after about a year. It's a rare mix of funny, sweet and sexy that was delightfully executed. 5 Stars. Thanks.

MomsnGurls4meMomsnGurls4me10 months ago

I absolutely loved it. She's so sweet and sexy, and I would have fallen for her,too.

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