All Comments on 'The Temp Ch. 04'

Fabulous , can’t wait till his boss catches them

Oh, there going to get caught. Nobody could be behaving this way in the office and not get found out. The questions is why is this girl so freaky and did the women who assigned her know it. If she did know it why assign her to him? Well written and entertaining.

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Cheers

Premise continue to be good.

Story not so much.

Still too jumpy. Boom into sex of one kind or another. Boom, again. Boom again.

Lots of sex. Lacks eroticism, though.

Nowhere does he get his cock played with for a while -- first outside his pants, and then hand directly on cock. No teasing from her -- ever. Just boom!

No dialog about how he likes what she's doing. Would he like more? Different? Faster? Slower? Would he like to cum right away or shaould she keep teasing his cock slowly and gently so the sensations go on and on and on.

Nowhere does she indicate what she'd like him to do to her. Not to her pussy. Not to her ass. Not to her breasts.

No real breasts invilvement. No titty fuck in any of the chapters so far.

No indication as to why they wouldn't have taken this to someplace other that the office, where there would be the chance of getting caught and distractions. His home; hers, a hotel/motel.

Three stars.