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by LrningDom

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
a mystery

Have enjoyed both chapters.. enjoy a little mystery with the story. (I'm such a mystery buff I've already convinced myself the secret admirer is actually Paul.) Sorry if I ruined a surprise.

Looking forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
a tad disappointing

Loved Ch. 1 but this Ch. was a disappointment. Was looking forward to her being back at the Temple with her mysterious robed lover. You need to get Paul out of the story and write about the Temple experience. Hurry .

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