All Comments on 'The Temporary Position Ch. 01'

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julrijulriover 12 years ago
good lord woman!

this was achingly hot!

me71me71over 12 years ago
Security cameras everywhere?

So who was watching Kat, hmm? ;)

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66over 12 years ago
I have to agree

Who was watching Kat?? Maybe the mysterious Rough... can't wait for what is next and god I wish I had her job lol

pa47epa47eover 12 years ago
well done

Great story, well thought out, light and entertaining even funny....Just a well written first chapter....

geemeedeegeemeedeeover 12 years ago
That was my thought, too!

Someone *totally* saw her. THREE-WAY!!

I want job like that, BTW. :0)

le8mebeele8mebeeover 12 years ago
HD

High definition hotness...

nomoretears00nomoretears00over 12 years ago
Damn!

Now that's reason to get up and go to work in the morning!!! LOL! Great story and can't wait for ch 2!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Fantastic stuff!

This is shaping up to be even better than Inside the Ring.

Loving the humour and the angle (as a girl who gets off on gay porn) and I have very high hopes for the coming chapters.

Well done, keep it sizzling!

Rossini12Rossini12over 12 years ago
Something different.

I enjoyed this story, plus the concept behind it, of a hot girl enjoying even hotter men, even thyough they are gay.

I would like to see it get even hotter with real action between the actors and/or crew and Kat! Looking forward to the next chapter.

fukmi_allnitefukmi_allniteover 12 years ago
Hmmmm....

Do I smell threesome?

fukmi_allnitefukmi_allniteover 12 years ago

One more thing, love the addition/profile of Marcus. I like the interracial aspect of his relationship and the blatant possibility that he might be a DL/bi man.

I suspect that the video monitoring might work both ways. Well done.

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