All Comments on 'The Temptations of Dee Pt. 03'

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lorainstudlorainstudalmost 4 years ago
Cant wait

For the next segment and her to be taken...well written, and well thought out. Has an easy read to it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
taking

tooooooo looong

YourcumkittenYourcumkittenalmost 4 years ago
love!

Love love LOVE Your stories, the only bad part is having to wait for the next chapter

hugggggggs

suzanne

alexetlaurealexetlaurealmost 4 years ago

Same for us ... can't wait for the next chapter ! So goood :-)

DunkirkDunkirkalmost 4 years ago

Dee needs S's cock in her pussy. Forget hubby. She would look and feel better once she has a black baby bump. It would do her a world of good and maybe teach hubby a lesson

Siska100Siska100almost 4 years ago

Please keep on writing about Jessica, Georgia, Carli, Emily, Dee, Izeye, Shaka, Antwan, Mr. Taylor, Alysha, even Levy, etc...

Your stories are captivating and a pleasure to read.

I can't wait to learn what happens next, to Georgia, Carli, and Dee.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
A little long winded

But oh for the fun of it. Love the buildup. Shaka could have taken her right then but left her hanging. Soon she will find out what that chocolate tube tastes like and feels like. Three chapters and Dee has not been taken but she knows the takeover will be soon. I do hope that she does not abandon her family but will be given her life back after she has it taken from her.

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Challenge 5 is now available. A lot of world-building in this one but I hope you enjoy it. Challenge 6 is 80% written and should be submitted before the end of the month. Thanks for all your kind comments and support