All Comments on 'The Tenant Ch. 04'

by sherryjones

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DINGDONG33DINGDONG33over 1 year ago

Good work and story, very lucky guy to walk in on her. Looking forewarned to see where this story goes. Had a little trouble at first following who was talking but quickly got into how you was doing this. Just be sure to keep the gender in right place. Spelling and language much better that most authors on here. Overall very good writing and story telling, keep up the good work.

cmj711cmj711over 1 year ago

Such a good storyline. It would make a good movie.

A kinky Pretty Woman ;)

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