All Comments on 'The Tent'

Any man who would let his woman fuck around on him, for one day or one year, regardless, over A CAMERA and SOME PHOTOS...

Fuck that.

So he got a Colt 44? 'Know how easy it is to get an unlicensed Magnum 356? 'Know how easy it is to start shooting someone when he get out of his tent or, even better, when he's too busy fucking your wife?

And, if you're not willing to fight for your wife? WALK AWAY. Who wants to stay married to some whore who immediately cave to some stranger's sexual demands anyway? Once again: FUCK THAT. This isn't a game - this is your life!

Such an idiotic, dumbass premise. But hey - cuckolding must happen, right? Geez...

:)

If it’s ‘to be continued’ the title should include ‘chapter one’ or ‘part one’

Not cool

So it had appeared that a "mountain Man" took his wife into a tent. Forget that she went. But when she does he is so relaxed he could sleep in the truck? That blew it for me. Then when they appear to all know each other it looks to be some set up.

Could be a fun series but I don't like those holes.

run the fucker over

1 year cheating twice a week for some semi nude pictures... her privacy is more important than her marriage, nice.

Burn his tent down

You know where it is, every week.

Finally, learn the use of ed

Has potential if she only agreed this time and her and robert sort mike out, but I somehow doubt it. Shame I thought it was going to be a bit of fun maybe some extracurricular, but not the whiny voiced you're a cuckold I'm an alpha bs

Go to the cops. Where's Mountain Mike going? They show up, take the camera and chip into custody and the idiots go home, get their receipt, go to the police station and get their property. A smart cop simply looks at a couple of the pictures, understands the situation and arrests the bearded idiot with the unlicensed weapon. This was poorly thought out drivel. NEVER continue.

1 star

But he breaks that by videotaping it and at no point do they go to cops and cry rape?

I guess every car thief actually owns the vehicle they have because @fibders keepers”, right? And she agrees to being raped isn’t consent, it’s still rape.

Sorry but this is a one star story simply because it’s set up to be completely fucking stupid that no one would agree to.

I suggest you five up writing. This is just a stupid story. Going by the voting for your other stories, you are just wasting your time and ours!

I won't bother looking for the next chapter. If she has sex with him to prevent naked pics on the internet, she is both an idiot and as cheating whore and hubby needs to run as fast as he can.

You should have left Vicky there with "Iron Mike" and gone home to start the divorce process, no sense waiting for her stupidity to mature.

1*-nothing more needs to be said

This had ZERO redeeming qualities whatsever. I felt brain cells dying as I read this, screaming in agony.

Cucks who dont jettison the fuck sluts always get one star

You are in desperate need of an editor.

The situation:

1) Guy steals your camera.

2) He threatens to shoot you.

3) He is filthy / borderline homeless

4) He won't give it back unless he gets to fuck your wife alone in his tent.

Your options:

1) Call the police

2) Leave and call the police

3) Forget the camera and just leave

4) Let him fuck your wife and hope that:

A) he doesn't kill her and then kill you

B) rape her

C) cause her pain / torture

D) give her diseases

E) impregnate her

The risks:

1) he kills you when you try to call cops or leave

2) cops come and he says it is his... Would get confiscated. If your sim card is there, likely return to you. If not, then likely go to court. End result, you get it back

3) he releases pictures of your wife in bikinis and lingerie.... So fucking what

4) if she fucks him, see a - e above

5) he fucks her, still refuses to give it back, or worse, wants more... Money... Wants to keep her... Kills you anyway...

And...

You pick: wife gets fucked

That's about as stupid as possible.

KB

The deal is she has to be his slut every two weeks to get a camera back just to avoid a few embarrassing pics being posted???

Lame.

KB

How does Mountain Mike hand her the camera less the sim card while capturing the entire event on video?

And which one is poor little hubby holding--oooh, bad boy, your wussy self should be ashamed--when she comes looking for him?

I just wanted you to know that most people, including me, loved your story so far. Please ignore the negative comments from people, who most likely never submit stories of their own. Keep up the hot stories. I love it.

The scores and comments show conclusively that MOST people, not even a few people, do not like this poorly written mess. I will agree that most of us haven't written anything. But that is because, unlike this author, recognize that we have no talent for writing. That said, do have the ability to know good writing when I see it. This damn sure ain't it.

plot and poorly written.

Hello. When can we expect to see part two?

weak writing not even a sequel you could do way better

Junk

Why even write a story that you won't finish.Are you that much or a piss poor writer? I'll answer that for you....yes! Judging by the length of time you wrote this story,, a long time ago..I'm sure by now you understand how God awful you are because you haven't written much after your storm trip writing..thank God for small favors.

You buy the premise, you buy the bit.