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- The Things I Wished You Could Do
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tall_black_mack6 days agoSo sexy, so desirable, so edible. I love your pacing, timing, and your voice. Very well done. Five stars.
Prcious1over 2 years agoAuthorThank you so much lovely listener for this feedback. Posted with his permission.😊💜
“The things I wished…” delivered for me in the two critical areas; erotic quality of the script and audio presentation. The script met my needs in terms of the overall flow, with strong, engaging erotic buildup, powerful, explicit word usage and a story line that fit my car ride (second listening) as well as private play time. Your voice and style of delivery are embracing, warm, sexy and sultry. I can listen in my warm, happy place for the fun of it or lie back and play endlessly. In terms of constructive criticisms, not much really. Voice emphasis is a bit strong a few times, but does not affect the overall smooth, lovely delivery. The crying/longing segments cut in a bit on the erotic flow of the hottest segment, but nit picking on my part. This one does not dethrone any of your top 5 for me but that’s more about the quality of your portfolio. Many thanks.
poet_of_seductionover 2 years agoExcellent audio, please partner with u/MyNameMadeYouSmiley again you both make a great team; I anticipate the next audio.
Prcious1over 2 years agoAuthorFeedback Response - Low_Growl
Thank you so much for that lovely feedback. Just putting a voice to Smiley's wonderful words. I can always count on his scripts to convey what I'm feeling at that moment. And I enjoy knowing that I was able to bring his words to life for you and you were able to visualize it in your mind.☺💜
