All Comments on 'The Third'

I’m not usually into the MM stuff, but this story managed to portray a true poly love story perfectly. Well done

The story is marvelous

Love your stories.

Well written and unusual romance. You even managed to incorporate the MM ideas without stopping me reading which is quite an achievement. Making him leave, then go back made it much more realistic. Thanks.

An excellent, moving story. Thank you. Well, as others have stated, I'm very open-minded but the MM scenes grated with me. However, the well defined "love" expressed was well presented and totally beautiful. Sadly, my pedantic legal mind knows that there cannot be three names on a birth certificate. Huge tracts of Law are entwined in things like inheritance issues etc and legal rights and responsibilities re guardianships.

Plus, while many western countries have extensive "Relationship" laws that allow more than one relationship partner, that is NOT the situation in the US with their Marital and Matramonial property laws. But let's not allow facts to ruin a good story! Thanks again.

I simply love this!

Very well done!

Outstanding! Great description without being too wordy. I could feel the emotions. Very well done!

What a lovely (and hot) story.

An absolutely beautiful piece

Hot story. Beautifully written. I wish there were more scenes with the three of them enjoying all sorts of MMF activities. Could there possibly be a sequel? Maybe they could go on a vacation together and enjoy other like-minded people's company?

Love it! So hot!

I love this!

Love this story

Bra-Vo! This is easily the most romantic third-wheel story I've read or imagined.

I love all your stories, although I was prepared to hate this one because the characters seem like such entitled pricks at first. I was actually rooting for it to end with Amber & Sophia. But all's well that ends well.

A minor error: China is in fact right-hand drive like the U.S., the exceptions being Hong Kong and Macau, which are still left-hand drive. The Lotus Bridge (see picture at Wikipedia) shows a half-cloverleaf that allows traffic to switch sides between the PRC and Macau without having to stop.