by Sanzas
I always love reading a new contribution from you - I never imagined that a story centered around tickling could be so hot. I am looking forward to reading about Chloe's punishment in all its glorious, humiliating details.
The next part is submitted--probably up in two days. Glad to have an avid reader!
As always, a fascinating mixture of fantasy and discipline. The addition of new and unusual punishments is appreciated. The Mocking Birds continue to bring a smile to my face
What a read. The imagination and fantasy elements surprised (mocking birds, lol?) But never more than a few paragraphs before back to punishment or other sexual matters. So it had a good balance of fantasy and erotic concepts that kept me interested. A little too extreme for my taste just a couple of times, but that won't stop me trying the next chapter.
At risk of a little self-promotion, this is much in the same vein as one of my stories, The Priestess' Punishment. But yours got to the point faster - the first day of tickling was my favourite section of the story. I'm a little bummed that it sounds like Chloe's stint in the tickling dungeons may be over, but I have confidence the other parts will not disappoint.