All Comments on 'The Time Device Ch. 01 - Discovery'

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dvmrdvmr8 months ago

Great Story. I hope it continues. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

4 Stars, I liked it, kind of a quirky story, but it has potential in whatever he'll use it for in chapter 2.

MedicalpeteMedicalpete8 months ago

Interesting and intriguing! Now I will wait to see where this story goes.

SouperKev777SouperKev7778 months ago

Wonderful story please continue it.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Nice story, with great potential. The protagonist can go in many different directions to satisfy his (and other’s ) sexual desires. Please follow up with future stories with this concept.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Excellent, next part please.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Pretty good story. All you need now is to continue the tail I mean other Tale. Perhaps make the guy a cuckold,Her as a really nice way to make cash tax-free could be worked into the story. A NEW CA!!!

RobertFettRobertFett5 months agoAuthor

Sorry guys. My laptop died. I don't have money to buy a new one, because things are tight right now. I'll finish the series one day, I hope.

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