All Comments on 'The Timestop Gift Ch. 02'

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Anonymousabout 5 years ago

Well this fixed his screwing Amy

But with Grandpa's return you opened up a whole new can of worms. If this is the end, at least I'll give you props for him not being a complete asshole. But this is still an unfinished story.

Anonymousover 3 years ago

Keep going

Dude you can't just leave a story like this open ended.

Anonymousabout 2 years ago

OMG I love this series. Please keep going.

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On makeshift bedding in the cucumber garden, the hilltribe girl clings to her exhausted lover. Limbs still chaffing with pleasure, dissolving against him she now and again with one bare foot jostles a shell necklace that hangs from a vine on the fence - rattling it though th...

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