The Timestop Gift

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Ravensing
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"Fuck!" She exclaimed, looking down at John's cum-covered cock and the ripped condom. "It broke?! Did you just cum inside of me?! No!" panic splayed across her face as she spread her legs and held her pussy lips open. Globs of John's cum spilled from her gaping hole.

"Fuck! I'm not on birth control you asshole! That's what the condom is for!" John watched as she dug at her pussy, slopping globs of it out of her with her fingers. John shrugged, a smile on his face. He dressed and left quickly. It was worth it.

It was dark outside as John walked down the street. He whistled to himself as he went. He was on top of the world. Time stopping watch or not -- he could get what he wanted from a woman. He looked up at the stars and smiled. "Thanks Gramps. Now what should I do next?"

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I liked this one a lot! Actually it’s my favorite of your time stop stories. I feel like your protagonist was really fleshed out and felt believable. At first I was like wtf about him not trying to hide that he came in her, because there were so many directions to take the story from there. But honestly, after a few minutes I decided I really liked it. You were at the end of the story you wanted to tell, and that little flash of corruption, like the first step of a good guy going bad, was intriguing. Plus, I’m hardcore into control and reluctance stories, so that bastard vibe really sets well with me :’) All in all, it was great. This site is far too harsh with its criticisms. You’re a great author and I hope you continue bringing us fics!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
with time being

the endless things you can do and push a story with the ability to stop time and he barley did anything cool with it. walked 10 miles to fix the lotto when he could of found a bar or anything close bye to watch from a tv. i mean do bikes stop working cause time is frozen..lastly poor amy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

He should have stopped time to hide that he came in her. Would just need to clean the cum out of her, and use her timestopped body and come in a fresh condom.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Who cares if john was an ass?

Think his douchebaggery made it enjoyable in my opinion

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Started Out Promising...

I did not read this to hear about your political beliefs or about some asshole impregnating an innocent girl who was already having issues affording her basic necessities and had a waitressung job. Yikes.

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