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All Comments on 'The Tiniest Angel'

by Sxyclassyldy

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Bobby TBobby Tover 18 years ago
Wonderful

A beautiful, well crafted story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I thought this

was beautiful just not long enough.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Eh...

Pretty but, your choice of words in some instances seemed overdone.. "hours and hours of crying" "...so close, so close". a bit overly repetative. Also while it is a pretty piece, perhaps it should have been placed under the non-erotic category.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Beautiful

That touched my heart.

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