All Comments on 'The Town Doctor'

Interesting concept. The organization of the story was all over the place and difficult to follow at times.

Thanks for the comment Miket0422 and I am aware that I write that way. I was looking for an editor to help with that, but the surprising thing is, that a lot of people are liking it. I guess it reads like my mind; all over the place. lol. Oh well, I'll get it together some day.

Interesting, I guess I'd be concerned about the small-town aspect as the Drs need to maintain some professionalism, which may be hard when everybody knows your business. The wife's reaction to the big dick could lead to some complications if the friendship continues.

I thought it was pretty well written.

NEWS FLASH! "This story involves the fictional characters."

It started out interesting, but then fell apart.

Some stories are way on the far side of silly. Like this one.

These newly married couples are just stupidly playing with fire

The doctor would regret once he opens pandora's bos.

His new wife likes black cock for sure...

I don't like where this story is going so no I didn't like it.

Yeah, not confident this one turns out well. His assistant turned tricks in college and says all the girls did, and knows his wife from college. His wife also knows things about the prostitute life style. It seems to me that these are things that should be discussed BEFORE marriage. I would want to know before I married a woman whether she was a prostitute or not. That would be an important piece of info to know, just sayin.

Good start then down hill all the way!

I am waiting for the next part.... The wife part is amazing and I hope you carry it forward and talk about her past with bbc