All Comments on 'The Toy Ch. 03'

I know this story is in chapters but this one feels incomplete. The build-up was fantastic; descriptive, tantalising and most certainly arousing. But then it just ends. Why so little description of the main event? You had created such vivid visuals up to then that i could see it as clearly as a movie running in my mind. Then we're left hanging at the complete lack of description of the pussy eating. If only you'd described every kiss, lick, caress and suck, the movemt of his soft wet lips along the lenth of her pussy lips, the swelling of her pussy, their every moan, her climax, her reaction to his movements, his hard cock straining against the cage as her orgasm builds.