All Comments on 'The Training of a Young Submissive Ch. 24'

As usual, you write very well.... only 1 very small mistake. Somewhere through this piece you used the word "waste" instead of "waist". A very minimal mistake and I should not have even mentioned it considering the greatness with which you write. I'm assuming that all this detail means more is coming to this story. One can only hope.

wow so good loved this , can't wait to see what happens next.

I can't wait to read more. They are all so devoted to eachother.

i love this story, and have been following it for some time. As an English major, i over looked the area of first person writing and the omniscient view (such as when Sam is not around, but the story is still being told,) but it became rather hard to ignore when having a flashback in this chapter. Just something to think about in the future. Keep adding to it though, i love the relationships and the great story mixed with hot sex.

I wanted to complement the author on the humane sentiments expressed in this last chapter and for that matter throughout this wonderful work.

Over the last fifteen years, almost everybody close to me has passed away including my beautiful wife, We had twenty-five wonderful years and losing her has left a void in my psyche. I appreciate how you have blended the reality of losing love ones with a work of fiction.