All Comments on 'The Training of Michael Ch. 02'

Fantastic level of detail. Please don't rush the story line, maintain your current pace, please! Too many stories are designed to get you off as fast as possible. I want to be immersed in a story, and yours has gotten off to a wonderful start to do just that. Keep up the good writing:)

I love the way you can express the mindset of michael. And the fact that the clerk and the waitress, too, were aware of who/what michael is was very intriguing. I can't wait for the next chapter! Hurry, please!

Your stories are good. I enjoy your husbands stories. This one was very short and doesn't really convey the feelings that Michael would have giving up all and anticipating what is next. Still it is a good start

I enjoyed this chapter, and I agree it was too short but is sure left me wanting more! I can't wait until the next chapter!

Mistress V (in Palm Springs)

i really like how this chapter creates such mystery, about our Dear Lady Victoria. Having everything in place for michael at the hotel, is a demostration of her power. And of course shows that what he wants doesn't matter.

This author just keeps leading us deeper and deeper into the world of BDSM. I love it!