by AmberSolis
Somewhat confusing, but ultimately it all came together and I loved it... I think. Men can truly be oblivious, but generally not with an oncoming train. We generally see the train coming, we just lose momentary control of the joy stick! But i'll be looking for the next chapter to see what happens when Trevor sees that oncoming light...
We are so oblivious, very often it's later on reflection we see the obvious. I confess to missing some great opportunities :)
I like it so far, will look for part 2.
Very nice; Trainwreck Woman! The only thing you got wrong is that there is only one such woman that a man encounters. I'm guessing that most guys have seen a lot of Trainwreck Women come hurtling down the tracks toward them with headlights blinding and horns blaring! The only question is how often have they been run over. Very intriguing beginning for a series. Will Trevor's nickname become Pancake? Is that why the story starts at The Pancakes House? Could get very interesting. 5 stars for a great start!