All Comments on 'The Transfer Student's Big Secret'

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FailedscoutFailedscoutover 1 year ago

What a great short story. It was super hot and very stroke worthy.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very nice! I hope there's at least one follow-up story in your mind. I'm quite interested in how kinky and dominant Yumi's alternate "personality" can be!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Definitely can't wait until a future chapter - hope this goes on for a long time and becomes a huge series. Great first story here!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Thanks for writing this story. It was hot. I like that Umi is demure but becomes aggressive during sex. Just one minor quibble, you should have her use lube. I'm not a killjoy who insists on absolute realism, but a huge cock shafting a dry butthole wouldnt be pleasurable at all. He needed lube and some preliminary fingering. But like I said just a minor detail.

HardfordiverseHardfordiverseover 1 year ago

Really enjoyed that. Thank you.

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