All Comments on 'The Transformation Ch. 01'

Both improbable and impossible to believe a woman in her position falls that far. Even for fiction this was just ridiculous.

I'd love to see a chapter 2

Sick and sad.

A bit far fetched but true to the point. I believe any girl can be the most beautiful in the world. You don’t need the Doc as it were, you just need the attitude and a responsibility grateful husband who will do everything to bring out the milf or gild in a beautiful wife Xoxoxoxox Annette

This story should go in SF section. Description of doc says all.

It takes a real piece of shit to write this crap

BE1953 have seen CNN too much, and they did make him a cuckold

she was just another whore in theend why didn't he kick her ass out you must be black if you don't keep on with this story and have her ass kicked out maybe he will take her back but on his terms she can only do him

Hate this kind of story. Wish there had been notice that it was humiliation and dominance themes. I would have by passed it and saved the 1.

But this isn't plastic surgery. This is straight up fantasy. Why not wave a magic wand and turn her into a hot 18 yr old virgin?

Yeah, agree with all. Perhaps Lit should find a way to ensure authors are 18+...... I have my doubts

Couldn't finish it .

1* and wish it could be minus 1,000,000.

You win all of the awards for dumb story of the year! Congratulations!

Have you found a boyfriend yet?

Wrong category. Terrible writing and stupid plot. You would be better off just writing on restroom walls. A 1-.

hate fucking cuckholds the wives should be taken out and gangbanged forr days the useless bitches

I thought the transformed-into-a-fantasy bits were hot, but the interracial parts just really don't do it for me. (Maybe because I'm not white myself, I just don't get it.) I'd happily read more from you like this, but without that theme. (Of course, if that's what really turns your crank, you go for it.)

It's awesome!!!! I feel addicted to this story! You must write another chapters!!!

I really love the bimbo transformation! Very hot story!

No real plot or character. Lacks eroticism and any sense of real life. Reads like a quick adolescent jerk story.

Hope there will be a chapter 2

This.piece of shit cuckold trash earns a *1. I almost never *1 bomb, but this didn't deserve even that.

At least I don't recall ever giving any story a *one* rating. The plot and its embedded assumptions are as vapid as the characters. Worthy of contempt.

A thoroughly unsatisfying story. It seems that the motivating force of her project was to get revenge on her nominal husband for all the attention he paid to the on-line "experience." I didn't mind the medical science fiction elements, but the selfish, witless behavior of the wife was contemptible in the extreme.

Wondrous, but please don't stop here! More changes, and maybe even re recruiting their daughters uf they have.

a super story !