All Comments on 'The Transformation Ch. 01'

He's a sad little man who offers nothing but nasty remarks. Join the other authors here who are deleting his nonsense.

How are "incels" like him getting to Canada,when they barely summon the courage leave mommy's basement once a week to stock up on Mt Dew and redpills?

Saw your same comment on another thread. Plagiarism, or just stupidity.? Who the hell would go to Toronto to run down sweet little Canadians?

Pretty sure I meant the story asshole. No, I'm certain it was the story.

Cucky, pretty sure he uses those adjectives to describe you, not the story.

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Asshole, he doesn't call himself "Fag, Cuck, Shit" ,. He used those adjectives to describe this story. Agree completely.

Ignore the trolls! Especially the guy who calls himself Fag Cuck Shit! His folks must have known what a cull he was as soon as his mother shit him out!

I enjoyed the first chapter and I am eager to see what happens next. it seems like it is going to evolve into a great story.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

Fag, cuck, shit! Really, really, really, bad. What a remarkable day for LW and it's normal readers.

LW Troll. No I Am Not Justgr8

I COMPLETELY ARBITRARY WITH RULES DECIDED IN MY OWN MIND STRENUOUSLY OBJECT TO YOUR CATEGORY CHOICE. NEGATIVE TWELVE POINTS!!!

oh, then I read it, it’s fine, whatever

Did you even bother to proof read this drivel?

Why do I get the feeling she is just making you another pussy for Sebastian. You have jacked him off, taken a dildo up your ass in front of him so the only things left are the blowjob and the real thing up your ass.

Interest marriages: for money, for loneliness, for sex, for status...never for love...So it doesn't matter if in the end it become an open one, just because they are just fuck buddies...No emotions will be involved...1*

Why are you at Loving wives?

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