All Comments on 'The Transformation of Connie'

A great read, however the monologue grammar was a bit confusing. Sometimes the " " just "enclosed" some of the speech... Should have been proof read an extra time =)

I want to thank each of you who took the time to read my fictional stories and enjoyed them and perhaps even decided to follow me. Along with my thanks, I appreciate every one of you who commented on my works, no matter if your comments were positive or negative. I admit, I am human and yes, I make mistakes and if you took the time to point them out to me, well I appreciate it. Sometimes after reading the same darn story and proofing it 10x over, I still miss things. Your feedback helps me to continue to improve and sharpen my craft every day. If you said I was off in my directions, I do realize it as I try to get the story as accurate as possible without getting too wordy. If you thought my story line sucked or a particular character was stupid or arrogant, I will try to take your thoughts into account on future stories and characters. I see my characters through one set of eyes and my readers give me a whole new and wide perspective on each of my characters, what they do, how they act, etc... from their worldly experiences. So, instead of getting angry…at feedback…I applaud you and I would encourage you to keep doing what you do. I appreciate it very much….keep reading and enjoying the fiction!

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The Doll Keeper

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