All Comments on 'The Trap Ch. 05: A Proposal'

I am loving the storyline for Paula as it does strike a cord with myself as I have wanted to do some similar things as you have already written in your stories but never had the balls to do them. I actually though that Sue had something to do with what was going on but was happily surprised to find out she did not, however, a thought of adding Sue back into the story later on as she wants to see and talk to Paula to try and smooth things over but she gets a very happy surprise both for her and Paula.

love to meet louise

If there's one good thing that's come out of this COVID19 situation, it's that you've had tine to advance this story. Can't wait to see where it goes!

I’d love to see Paula get some body mods, implants, lips, pierced nipples and Prince Albert for chasity purposes, laser hair removal, pierced tongue, etc. I want to see her completely transformed into a slut. Please haha.

one of the things I would love to do!

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a dream storyline even though yes the perils/warning signs "beware of what you wish for" are clear for all fantasists to note..but wow enjoyed every word and image created by in parts 1-5 inclusive darling.....thank you...samantha xxx

I'd love to read how she's totally feminized!

so good, then done, no more story, still four star up until now.