All Comments on 'The Trespasser Ch. 02'

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Sunset154Sunset154over 5 years ago
Great Story

Thanks, great story. Looking forward to the last part.

MajorRewriteMajorRewriteover 5 years ago
5 stars

Interesting story. Good characters. No dopey melodrama. My only suggestion is more detail about the sex. The romance novels she’s supposed to write do a good job of describing EVERYTHING in the sex scenes.

maddictmaddictabout 4 years ago

Every girl should be so lucky.

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