All Comments on 'The Trip Ch. 05'

what a whore. why is that even necessary for her to have sex with the lawyer? no wonder she has insecurity issues. thats disgusting, there is no way you could even try to make her seem valid for spreading her legs for that prick. she just seems like a useless whore, that damn lawyer doesnt do anything for her either way.

stupid doesnt even begin to say what this whore is....ok so just hand everything away on a silver platter....whore gives this woman a bad name

You threw away any and all compassion we had for Kim. The end result is that you threw the story away. As a reader, I no longer like your lead female character, nor can I no longer identify with her; thus I will most likely not read any follow-on chapters. Sorry, but you basically killed this story.

Did you have to make her go there. I know she's desperate but she still has options.

I could have sworn I've read this last chapter before - did you take down then repost this story? Well, either way, I agree with the others. I stopped reading this story the first time she had sex with the lawyer. I was hoping something would be different so I decided to give it another try. But, nope, she had to go and have sex with the lawyer again. Oh well, I'm sorry to say I won't be reading this anymore. But anyways, I really could have sworn I've read this chapter before.

Oh snap both Rachel and Brian got turned about in this chapter