All Comments on 'The Trusty Tryst'

by AineAshton

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Time2GLTime2GLover 12 years ago
I Didn't Notice the Grammatical Errors

I was too caught up in the extraordinary description of an extemely hot fuck! You conjured such images in my brain! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Terrific

Great first story. Please keep writing as your descriptions are sublime and exciting. Perhaps the lady might even be able to enliven her friend's libido in the sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great eroticism

Love that story. Hope you write more

AineAshtonAineAshtonover 12 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you for the comments. I will go back and correct my mistakes - I always appreciate a savvy eye when it comes to corrections. Many more stories involving Aine are in creation. And, yes...Sophie can't help herself in one event! Thanks for all the encouragement. It's all about having fun!

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