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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Bad choice of tenses IMO

The mixed first and second person tenses make the story difficult to follow. First and third would be better.

Good luck with your writing.

lovetoplaysexylovetoplaysexyalmost 9 years ago

one of my favorite fantasies...now in black n white

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Polynosic :A texile fibre or fabric that is a blend of rayon and polyester, having a soft finish and used mainly in clothing. My name is Paul, I sell menswear and it is a nickname from a former boss. 44, 6'4, brown hair, blue eyes, 235 lbs Canadian male.