All Comments on 'The Tutor and the Student'

English isn't my first language, and I guess the same is true for you. I came accros several unusual word structures. I haven't seen acknowledgement for an editer, and would recommend you find one.

I like the story, but it read much like a narritive. As if an outsider was commenting on what happened. I wasn't drawn into the story, and remained an outside observer.

Good luck on your work.

Ai?

"She lied all the way back" - lay all the way back

"He thrusted to the back of her pussy" - thrust to the back.