All Comments on 'The Twelve Tables Ch. 03'

I'm glad he gave her that point of reference, that way she won't have to wonder what if. On another note, while I loved the story there was a lot of spelling mistake. It just breaks up the story when you have to figure out what was meant.

I love this series! Its wonderful to watch them grow together. And the sex scenes...hot!! Keep up the amazing work :)

Even when Josh was in the wrong gecaus Peri went ou with Andie and she just didn't call, she shouldn't be entorely submissive to him. One of the things I love bout her is her strength and power and willingness to stand up to him. I'm afraid she will lose that. I know she loves that he takes charge, but if she doesn't keep her need to stand up to him and some of her independance, you will have ruined her.

After reading the Bella series which I am enjoying, I didn't know if I was ready for another female knowing immediately that she really was a slave submissive. This is much more realistic IMO - a woman being "allowed" to explore her submission

please continue this story. i am dying to know what happens next.

what a let down...u have this written as a 3 part series so is there another part to this?

I am currently working on the next part of this series I am sorry you felt let down.

I love what you write. You have such an understanding ...

I suppose you are either a submissive who has found the perfect Master for you, or are writing about your perfect Master.

I say this, because this chapter shows a very real and important side of the D/s relationship, the way each half of the equation brings out the best in the other.

Well done.

now get out of my head and my bed *giggles*

Dirty & Romantic - and lots of fun ;-)

So erotic. OMG