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Noah was beyond pleased, despite her guilty silence. His fingers continued to work on her as the thin material of her thong stretched and rubbed at her swollen clit. He felt her thighs tremble moments before she cried out and arched up, her muscles stiffening in the moment before she came over his hand. He withdrew his hand and wiped it over the back of her skirt. The dress would be ruined now. He smirked at the angry tirade that would probably ensue later and would give him another excuse to punish her and further his exploration of her.
Marcella was mostly dead weight as he moved her back to her seat like a rag doll. Then, Noah swung the door shut, put the car in drive and sped away before she had a chance to put her seatbelt on.
They rode in silence for several kilometres, as Marcella tried working through what had happened. Noah was hard. She could see the magnificent lump inside his cargoes and wondered if he wore boxers or went commando. She pulled her eyes away from temptation and stared at the dark beyond the headlights, as the heat of her spanking slowly eased. She remained wet and in need. She squirmed, knowing that Noah would notice. Noah's bright, intelligent eyes noticed everything. Marcella pondered breaking the silence, but how? What would she say? How could she wrest back control from him after that? She stole another glance at his cock.
"Just in case you have any doubt about how to affect me, Marcella," Noah growled and pulled her small hand and positioned it over his hard-on. He rubbed her hand along the long bulge and tried wrapping her fingers around it, through his pants. She was glad that he was hard, glad that she wasn't the only one in need. Glad that she wasn't the only one crumbling under the months of flirting and teasing they had both been trading. She worked the flap covering his zipper. If he could take an orgasm from her then fair's fair, she thought, with a malicious grin.
"Stop!" Noah commanded, as if he had read her mind again. "Not while we're driving. Do you always have to live so fucking dangerously and take such big risks? Can't you feel how close to losing control I am?" He turned his intense gaze on her, briefly. "If me losing control was the aim of your game, then congratulations. What just happened proves how out of control I am around you," he almost shouted at her. "Caress me if you like, now that I have shown you how you affect me, but you stay buckled in your seat, for fuck's sake!" He let out an explosive breath, and Marcella smiled in triumph.
"Winners are grinners," she said cockily, even though she didn't feel quite so cocky inside. She wanted him on her terms, and it was obvious that he wanted her. So why had he been holding back? And how long had he been holding back for?"
"I said close to losing control," he smirked at her. "Maybe hold off on that little victory party of yours because, from where I am sitting, I definitely won round one of your little game."
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- COMMENTS
lsnid003about 3 years agoHonestly, I don’t understand the anonymous comments about a different writer or the misogyny of the character of Noah. I see him struggling to deal with someone who has survived severe trauma and as someone who works with people like that I feel this character is well realized and realistically drawn out. To call someone misogynistic because they love BDSM or that’s a part of who they are is odd to me, but at any rate, we know that that is the category the story is (BDSM) so why are you reading something if you don’t like the BDSM lifestyle? Read something else. Once again, the writer has captivated my imagination, and I can almost picture what happens next. Keep up the great work! I feel again that this is very realistic and true to what a strong woman who is willing to give over control to a partner in real life. You are an amazing world builder and I love everything you write. This series is just more proof that the 12 tables is a great world and I hope that you don’t allow anonymous comments make you feel badly about your phenomenal writing.
Anonymousover 3 years agoThat after all is said and done that the families of the 12 Tables are so stereotyped that they are the BDSM equivalent of ‘Stepford Wives’, 99% are male dominant and whilst the majority females May appear as strong women they are without fail submissive sexually.
The following is one of Noah’s thoughts...
“He only had to deal with it for a week, possibly two, and then he could correct her thinking instead, he thought smugly.“
It’s a reference to her being in control of the operation to uncover the kink dungeon. The only thing he’s focused on is flipping the D/s roles. She isn’t worried about it because she isn’t planning on sticking around after she’s done what she needs to. I sincerely hope this doesn’t devolve into *and she realised her true role in life* it’s trite and demeaning. Is Noah going to be (rightly) horrified that she was forcibly trained as a *Kept* or is he going to rejoice that it won’t be such hard work to get what he wants? The concept of training women to be submissives is one that gets glossed over, we know exactly what they do but who do they do it for? Is it for any man in the families, just the single men??
Whilst I’ve enjoyed the underlying plots the concept of absolute male dominance is very off putting. What people want to do sexually is there own affairs, BDSM TPE with the M/f respectively is not a reasonable or sensible business model.
Tess (UK)
kiwiplumover 3 years agoGreat, second time reading the series and loving it all. Well rounded characters, good storyline and hot sex. :)
Anonymousabout 4 years agothis is written by someone who doesn’t know the first thing about emotions en real life.
Why would any woman wants a man who doesn’t care about who you are and only sees you as a conquest and a way to scratch an itch. The new writer is a man or a young woman who lived a shallow, sheltered life. Such a shame that the fantastic character that Marcella was ends like this, an insecure woman who needs a strong man who takes over her life.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoShe would never let him spank her, because she is not trusting him. And why would she, he is constantly telling her lies.
I would be so happy when she found somebody who really cared about her. And when respect and trust is formed, than she might accept a spanking. This is the first time that you would compromise you're characters for a sexscene.
