All Comments on 'The Twin'

The word "whilst" is not typically used by Americans. If you write a story claiming to be a mid-westerner, at least use the term "while."

"whilst" isn't the only odd word choice for a midwesterner. Writing like this just makes your character less believable, and the story harder to read. Next time, try writing what you know...or at least making your main character more believable.

I really liked the story. Let the trolls find fault in one word, the rest of us want more!

Best.....Story....EVER

Revenge on her twin should be next...definitely make the cycle complete.

could do better

A bit of public humiliation is one thing, but what you have here is story about an innocent girl having her entire life completely and unjustly ruined by her truly heartless sister! That's not funny or sexy! If the story had ended with everyone finding out about Chantal, it would have been fine. She still would have utterly humiliated, but everyone would have realized what really happened and her reputation would have been mostly restored. This was just far too cruel!