All Comments on 'The Twink Pt. 03'

Absolutely brilliant! The power of self inflicted destruction. Every step darker and deeper and ever lasting. The ego breaking is so awesome. I truly emjoy this level of control and manipulation. I have never found anyone I ciuld push this far. I admit I do have a conscience. But you have put together all the right elements. Fantastic fantasy. Hopefully you can stretch it out to its ultimate climax. Ever consider a longer more detailed novel length effort?

Thanks again Jeff

Intense! Fantastic manipulation and dominance.

More please?

my god !!! so perfect !!