All Comments on 'The Twins Ch. 01'

Almost good but not quite though rather sexy in places.

What's this "Her bottom literally gushed fluids," all about?

Rather good read. The over thinking bit could have been done differently but didn't detract from the plot. I do hope a sequel will be forthcoming?

3 stars

DragonRider55

That was hot!

Great read

Decent story but the narratives a little "clunky" at times. Some of the events are described in clipped, one thought/emotion at a time preventing the story from flowing. 3*

Good story

4/5

Fucking hot, cant wait for them to fuck each other’s brains out. Cunt lapping sex maniac U.K.

Very hot

The novella is called "Twins."

And in the beginning it was a story about twins and their feelings. Things change from there.

The author seems to have decided to exclude Alex from the active characters. He's destined to be

the role of "living dildo" on demand and covering up family secrets. I think it's a

a great tragedy for him, leading to moral degradation, psychological

trauma and even death.

Alex needs to take matters into his own hands, to be a leader, not a follower. Become an Alpha.

Then his relationship with his sister, his sister and her roommate, or just

with his roommate has a chance to live and grow.

Ellie doesn't understand this yet because of her age, and her mother and aunt only think about lust.

The father is not an example.

Alex's death, moral or physical, will also be a tragedy for Ellis.

S&M fantasies with her father are unclear at all.