All Comments on 'The Twins Ch. 07'

Not my favourite chapter but I am sure that chapter 8 will get the story back on track the first 6 chapters were excellent and carried the story along with the sex beautifully. Looking forward to chapter 8.

went from a good story, to ok when you tried to ad a girlfriend, to now totally unreadable. screwed up a good thing, couldnt even finish reading it. like i said last chapter, boy better run cause she is nothing but a slut, and trouble.

The novella is called "Twins."

And in the beginning it was a story about twins and their feelings. Things change from there.

The author seems to have decided to exclude Alex from the active characters. He's destined to be

the role of "living dildo" on demand and covering up family secrets. I think it's a

a great tragedy for him, leading to moral degradation, psychological

trauma and even death.

Alex needs to take matters into his own hands, to be a leader, not a follower. Become an Alpha.

Then his relationship with his sister, his sister and her roommate, or just

with his roommate has a chance to live and grow.

Ellie doesn't understand this yet because of her age, and her mother and aunt only think about lust.

The father is not an example.

Alex's death, moral or physical, will also be a tragedy for Ellis.

S&M fantasies with her father are unclear at all.

Probably should have got the girls and the brother together. That’s where it was headed. What happened? Got taken to a different path and yes ruined the buildup