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Click here"Mmmhmmm." The sheets are cool and silky, her body is soft and silky, this is a great night. I caress her body as she hums each time she pushes back and then tilts her hips until she gasps a few times. She flips around, "That was nice." We sit for a minute kissing and she looks over. "Can you get that or too soon?" she points at Neivia with her ass up in the air.
"Never too soon for that," I whisper back and sneak over, I haven't finished yet, so I reach down and push in at the same time.
"Hoooo! James!" Neivia's head snaps up and she looks back at me.
"Sorry, but I gotta do what your mother tells me to do." I wink at her and slap her ass, "wife."
"Exactly, Ugh, mmmhmmm." Neivia goes back to Abi who has her head back and is just enjoying life.
"We're going to have to gang up on him tomorrow," Cassandra says from a few feet away. She's up on an elbow behind Nora. I wink at them and nod.
"Nora. Come. Over. Here." Neivia says between thrusts.
"You heard her." Cassandra pushes Nora who gets out of bed and walks over and gets on her knees next to me.
Looking down at her ends my ability to hold on, I pull out and turn; Nora grabs me and sucks me in and jerks me with one hand. "That is hot Nora." Neivia says looking at her next to Abi. Nora pulls me out and jerks me with two hands with her tongue out. "God, you are getting so hard." I start cumming over and over again into her mouth and on her nose from a few inches away. Nora swallows and slides the missing into her mouth and then licks and sucks me squeezing it from the base to the top.
"There you go, nice and clean." She pats my stomach and gets back in bed with Cassandra and then I hear Nora, "Whew, so many times, I'm going to sleep in late."
I do a kiss goodnight to everyone and get back into bed.
The bath had people in it, male and female elves. They are slim and petite and had no issues with humans being in with them. Even Neivia was quiet during the process even with the teasing by Abi.
Breakfast was simply amazing; every piece of food and each sip of juice was exquisite.
Falael showed up shortly after breakfast and we gathered in the room we met the night before.
"*Ian Cale was easy to find, he has been here since the city was founded and has the largest account with us. I was surprised it was him, but there are no other Ian's to be found. He is said to be as old as I am or could be older, but there are no records from the last age. I've talked to him on occasion over the last forty years and each kingdom and Velho pay his account on the same day. He says it is their birthday gift."
For those that made it this far, there will be a very short appearance in CH2.
*Ian Cale character: Literotica Author: Intrepid Fate, Path of the Necromancer, last update 10/23/12, taking his amazing character and moving him forward in time approx. two thousand years. *Scraps: Revenant *Ember: The Succubus tied to Ian, both immortal as long as the other lives.
Things being added to the end of Intrepid Fates story: The Chinese attacked the United States through a magical back door that both sides knew about. Magical and Conventional weapons laid waste to just about everything. Only a few of the most powerful survived and then only the magical survived the 400 years of nothing before Ian helped shape the new age. He also recreated the Inquisition from the old age changing their charter from the rich and politicians to be for the people, over time they changed it to Inquisitors. A cameo appearance, not going to be used as more than a tribute.
- COMMENTS
Sniperkingover 2 years ago@LeakyFaucit
Okay that all makes sense but I think all that should have been in the story. The characters should have speculated or confirmed these things so the readers can follow along. Because if not then it looks weird and contradictory in my opinion.
LeakyFaucitover 2 years agoAuthor@SniperKing: You are correct.
- James is the only person recorded as being blank, not having the human magic pool inside of him. The books allow you to pull at the natural magic all around you and it may draw in more and make you a bit stronger and feel better, but humans are bound to their rules of an inner pool of magic as the Elves are bound to non-violence and access to an unlimited external source. James is unbound and his affect on those around him is from a very specific means... Harold is a bridge too far at the moment for that means :).
- The rest of them have had access to that means and over time the internal pool and single path is pointless.
- Abi like all others that have multiple paths break the human single path rule and also have access to external magic (in her rare case, taking James' pool in the womb). In most all other cases, they were half- elves and if they survived and were found, brought back to live with the elves.
Sniperkingover 2 years agoThe grammar is SOOO much better. Kudos to the author. I think it would make more sense to go back and fix book 1 first because chapter 1 especially is really bad in terms of grammar. I also found the discussion about natural magic confusing and contradictory in this chapter
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Falael smiles, "You could read a thousand books for a thousand years and never obtain the gift. You must have elven in you to gain more than the feeling of it."
"That answers that question," Abi says to all of us. "Harold is at his maximum potential."
"If Harold is human, he will feel wonderful drawing upon nature, but that will be all." Falael nods to Abi. "From your surprised reactions..." he pauses as his wife enters and speaks to her for a few minutes.
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so here he says you need to have elven in you to be able to do natural magic, and Abi says that means Harold won't be able to do it. But that doesn't make sense to me. He is their brother so if they've got elven in them then shouldn't he? How does she know it won't just take time like it did for Neivia and their mother. Also, this doesn't explain how Neivia was able to use natural magic since she is not related to either of them and it would be a stretch for both of them to be descended from elves.
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"This was something I have wondered, why we are only allowed one path and on a rare occasion like with my sister, two paths were attained," I reply. That means this cannot be taught and the wards on the books are probably not necessary. We just need to keep others from finding out how we figured this out.
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Again, I don't get the logic here. Aren't the books what made them able to figure this out? Unless you're going with the hereditary thing which still doesn't explain how Neivia can do natural magic.
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"Those with 'two paths'," he uses air quotes, "have not figured out they have more available. This means either one or both of you have always been different and shared it with the other in the womb."
"It was thought that Abi absorbed my power giving her both and me none," I reply.
"That would explain why you are unbound. Human power is the bond that prevents access to the true source as it would cause chaos and death. Just as the Elven bond does not allow us to use offensive power unless we are under direct threat. Nature's way of maintaining balance."
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So now we have a potential explanation for why he can do natural magic apart from descended from an elf. But this would mean Abi shouldn't be able, nor their mom or Neivia.
Honeslty I think the explanation you've been building up to was him being able to give his powers through sex plus a combination of Abi taking his powers in the womb making him unbound. That would clear eveyrthing up
