All Comments on 'The Two Davids'

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LASFSEALASFSEAabout 3 years ago
Heartbreakingly beautiful

The story is romantic and shows the love between 2 men with grace and dignity. Very mature writing while dealing with a difficult subject. Bravo!

GlasssvirginGlasssvirginabout 3 years ago

This was actually the first story I read on this platform and it is so sweet and sad and beautiful at the same time. Really great. <3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Beautifully done. Thank you for sharing this with us.

ScarelttScarelttalmost 3 years ago

That was such a sweet story. I was sad to read the dedication, it made me sad.

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I write primarily gay and bisexual erotica with themes of dominance and control. The stories I write are all based on true events, either from personal experiences or as told to me by others. I appreciate comments and reviews to help me improve. Please let me know if you find...